This week in literacy we have been looking at descriptive writing here is my writing about tip top ice cream .
I am a Year 8 learner in Room 2 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Ms. Tapuke.
I am a Year 8 learner in Room 2 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Ms. Tapuke.
David this was a stunning description of Tip Top the company! You used fantastic vocabulary and sentences. Next time lets describe one flavour in depth as well, just as we did during the taste test.
ReplyDeleteKia ora David, its Daniella from Totara 3.I really enjoyed your descriptive writing on tiptop, you did really well on the words you have picked for this piece, it makes it really interesting and made me hungry.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me when I had to do descriptive writing, I described a photo of single person walking in a dark hallway.
Hey David,
ReplyDeleteI really like your description about Tip Top Ice Cream. I really like the words you used in that description. When I read that description it made me feel like I want some Ice Cream. Maybe you could have change the font because I couldn't read some of the writing.
Fantastic Writing!