Wednesday, 2 May 2018

100 word challenge


Today in class we had to write a short story that had to include these five words shouted crimson misty frantically and grave here is my writing .

Donald trump shouted with his crimson face the crowd frantically left the scene. He noticed he had made a grave mistake so he ran away in the misty weather.

1 comment:

  1. David I thought this was a really funny short story. It just goes to show how few words it takes to set the scene for an event like this. Here you are using a technique called 'show not tell' where your author has to infer (or put together the rest of the story in their minds). A great way to use the five words!

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